This poem is a response to Tayyeba Irum‘s pitch perfect poem: The Lost Ones.
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Your love,
is like the galaxies in a cosmos,
enriched of stars…
And I,
I am like a satellite
with lost orbit.
Your love,
is like overwhelming rays of the star,
enlightening…
And I,
I am like an ice glacier
in cave blacken.
Your love,
is like a silver shower from the moon
at the night’s darkest…
And I,
I here am like a pebble
hidden in foggiest.
Your love,
is like a breeze chilling,
running wild and ruling…
And I,
I am like a flame in lantern,
flickering – dwindling.
Your love,
is like a dream
worth always remembering…
And I,
I am one who has found
yet no place for resting.
Your love,
is like a dew perching from above,
introducing spring…
And I,
I am like a leaf separated from tree,
since last falling.
Your love,
is like an only book worth reading,
time again when I’m sinking.
And yet, I’m…
A goldfish,
in lost memory
of where I keep it.

Your love is like an angel – pious in all aspects, and I,
I am like a sinner seeking long for a forgiveness.
– Dedicated to the love supreme and lovers invisible.
Photo Credits:
1. Cover paper – “Invincible“, single by Muse (Band)
2. The Kiss (1994) – Eleanor Hofer
beautiful, as usual. I haven’t seen you on my wordpress in a while so it was nice seeing this post again ^_^
I just saw this! Thank you so much.
Your poem is absolutely beautiful. *-*
wow, beautiful words. I now assume whenever you speak, poetry comes out of your mouth !
Not sure about that, but there’s no denial in fact, that whenever you speak, sweet words come out of you… 🙂 Thank you.