Each drop of rain
from her celestial sky
wrapped my whole world
Imagine how many universes
my world splits into
watching her downpour…
So I become an ocean,
a valley, a mountain,
a garden, and a tree…
Till every place the moist
becomes a window to her,
that drowns me in…
1. Raindrop by Aminah Tasleem
2. Rainfall (Stock wallpaper)
Love this perspective.. how you related nature to romance. Well-written.
Thank you. Would love to have your comments on other attempts as well.
its wonderful! how amazingly you have blended romance and nature!
While certain things seem to be taken lightly by most, some of us remain in the depths of a yearning, no solution, no escape, only the relentless pulse of our heart.
Thank you, Myriam. I guess, at one point the pain (of yearning) turns into a remedy (a solution) it self. Perhaps, when well can’t have a water in it for too long, it starts being contented with the void it has with in.
Kindly permit me the following lines, let’s talk about water:
I’m like water, impossible to hold in your hand
impermanent in my existance
I boil and dance in the arms of love
but I evaporate when those arms are gone
I’m like water, transparent, fresh, fundamental
but I disappear if you don’t care for me
I’m like water, I may run far away
but if you cry for me, I rain in your eyes
I’m like love, but I’m water
able to relieve your thirst, able to mitigate your fire